Sunday, November 8, 2015

I Wrote Your Name in Concrete

I wrote your name in concrete
In concrete it remains
I wrote it on the corner of State Street
And 81st

I wrote your name in concrete
Because I knew it'd always stay
You'd whisper to me sweet nothings
About you and me forever 

I wrote your name in concrete
Thinking somehow, someway
That would make your love not fade
But love doesn't work that way

I wrote your name in concrete
I guess you just wrote mine in pencil 
On the back of an old receipt

6 comments:

  1. ah i love this, "you'd whisper to me sweet nothings"

    this is perfect

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  2. "but love doesn't work that way" #stolen

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  3. your ending???
    ' I wrote your name in concrete
    I guess you just wrote mine in pencil
    On the back of an old receipt'

    SO GOOD!!!!!!!! #quality #stolen

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  4. Last line....FREAKING STEALING THAT!!!!!!

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  5. "I wrote your name in concrete
    I guess you just wrote mine in pencil"

    AHHHH SUCH A GOOD LAST LINE

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